English A: Lang&Lit (HL) - Craft Master

Analyse, compare and contrast the two texts. Include comments on the similarities and differences between the texts and the significance of context, audience, purpose, and formal and stylistic features.

Text 1

Text 2

so you want to be a writer?

if it doesn't come bursting out of you 

in spite of everything, 

don't do it. 

unless it comes unasked out of your 

heart and your mind and your mouth 

and your gut, 

don't do it. 

if you have to sit for hours 

staring at your computer screen 

or hunched over your 

typewriter searching for words, don't do it. 

if you're doing it for money or 

fame, 

don't do it. 

if you're doing it because you want 

women in your bed, 

don't do it. 

if you have to sit there and 

rewrite it again and again, 

don't do it. 

if it's hard work just thinking about doing it, 

don't do it. 

if you're trying to write like somebody 

else, 

forget about it.

if you have to wait for it to roar out of 

you, 

then wait patiently. 

if it never does roar out of you, 

do something else.

if you first have to read it to your wife 

or your girlfriend or your boyfriend 

or your parents or to anybody at all, 

you're not ready.

don't be like so many writers, 

don't be like so many thousands of 

people who call themselves writers,

don't be dull and boring and

pretentious,

don't be consumed with self- 

love.

the libraries of the world have 

yawned themselves to 

sleep over your kind. 

don't add to that. 

don't do it.

unless it comes out of

your soul like a rocket,

unless being still would

drive you to madness or suicide or murder,

don't do it.

unless the sun inside you is burning your gut,

don't do it. 

when it is truly time, 

and if you have been chosen, 

it will do it by 

itself and it will keep on doing it 

until you die or it dies in you. 

there is no other way. 

 and there never was.

-- From sifting through the madness for the Word, the line, the way
by Charles Bukowski.
 Copyright © 2003 by the Estate of Charles Bukowski.

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